Friday, May 6, 2011

The correcting the mistakes.

  • On Friday , we will have another chance. / On Friday, we will have another chance.
  •  It 's not necessary,but I will do it. / It's not necessary, but I will do it.
  •  The movie,Full Speed, is coming soon. /  The movie Full Speed, is coming soon.
  • It' s a well designed program. /  It's a well designed program.
  • IBM(International Business Machines ) was not present. / IBM (International Business Machines), was not present.
  •    Clinton said,"How do you like my budget"? / Clinton said, "How do you like my budget?"
  •  The word "arbeit "is not English. / The word "arbeit" is not English.
  • The New York Times called it "a giant mistake. " / The New York Times, called it "a giant mistake."
  •    The blue colored text is hypertext . / The blue colored text, is hypertext.
  • HTML (hypertext markup language)is used to link documents,but the server must be able to find the document. / HTML (hypertext markup language), is used to link documents, but the server must be able to find the document.
  • Turing said,"Give me read-write head and a..tape long enough and I will compute the world." / Turing said, "Give me read-write head and a tape long enough and I will compute the world."
  • There are many technical terms, for example,"RAM", "ROM," and "EPROM." / There are many technical terms, for example "RAM," "ROM," and "EPROM."
  • Three companies participated:Fujitsu,IBM, and NEC. / Three companies participated: Fujitsu, IBM, and NEC.
  • JIS ( Japan Industry Standard ) codes are used. / JIS (Japan Industry Standard) codes are used.
  • That ' s not the procedure we need. / That's not the procedure we need.
  • They invited NEC,IBM,and Toshiba to the trade show. / They invited NEC, IBM, and Toshiba to the trade show.
  • It says that the third power of two(2^3) is eight.Is that right? / It says that the third power of two (2^3) is eight. Is that right?
  • Grace Murray Hopper, who developed the Common Business-Oriented Language (COBOL), said that, " If anyone asked if we were accomplishing anything, we replied that we were 'debugging"." / Grace Murray Hopper, who developed the Common Business-Oriented Language (COBOL), said that, "If anyone asked if we were accomplishing anything, we replied that we were 'debugging'."
  • ENIAC was...the world's first fully electronic general-purpose (programmable) digital computer, although this claim, as well as the validity of the patents for ENIAC, was challenged in 1973 by John V. Atanasoff (b.1903,) a professor at Iowa State College. / ENIAC was the world's first fully electronic general-purpose (programmable) digital computer, although this claim, as well as the validity of the patents for ENIAC, was challenged in 1973 by John V. Atanasoff (b.1903), a professor at Iowa State College.
  • Turing visited the United States in 1942 and apparently talked with John von Neuman (1903-1957) , a mathematician, but had little impact on the American development of the computer until after the war,at which time there was extensive American-English discussion on the subject of computation. / Turing visited the United States in 1942 and apparently talked with John von Neuman (1903-1957), a mathematician, but had little impact on the American development of the computer until after the war, at which time there was extensive American-English discussion on the subject of computation.


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